Axem-Ranger's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fall Down]

needs improvement

nice touch with the preloader.
The game needs to get faster much earlier, maybe add items you can pick up (like the strawberries in Pac-man) and maybe boulders to block your path, add some noises and a music loop.

OrangeWorks responds:

My friend suggested making the ball be able to jump over obstacles, but I think at faster speeds that would just be impossible... We'll see.

And about the items, I plan to add those once I get a title screen and options screen going.

[Paintball Gun Rampage]

could be better

Here's a few suggestions..
1) two or more different characters
2) health pick-ups
3) boss fights
4) enemy variety
5) increasing difficulty
6) rewards for high scores(such as new music or weapons,maybe a funny picture or secret video clip)

good job,better luck next time but I think this will be protected.

packow responds:

Good ideas.

[How To Pass Judgement 2]

Thank you

I only voted zero on review b/c this isn't a real movie. Anyway, this should be in the literature section and some users I know should really take notes from this.Thank you for trying to show people the light.

packow responds:

True, its not a real movie. But its too late to blam, so u might as well Vote five to get this a decent score!

[Metroid Chaser]

yawn

what's the objective?Survive the boredom? I noticed in a response you called those lumps areas from metroid.They looked like lumps with the names on them to me, but maybe they were from some in-game map.The game isn't fun man,and no music.Games rarely do well on NG unless you make another frank's adventure.Stick to movies or make games with more features?

C360 responds:

Yeah, if you read the last review carefully, you would then know the backgrounds were maps from the ACTUAL GAME. This submission wasn't really meant to be so serious about to the extent of tearing it apart to tell me that its not worth posting unless I make an epic..which I do plan on making.